I live in a three-bedroom apartment, and it is on the 10th floor of a 12-story apartment building in incheon city.

the first thing you see when you step into my house is the entrance area, where you can take off your shoes, where I take off my shoes -> 나의 집에 대한 소개이니까 일인칭이 좋을 듯 합니다. 

anyway on the left on the left side of the room, there is a are kitchen area and my bedroom.

on the right right side is a living room.

next to the living room, you can see the master bedroom and balcony.

of those, the room I like the most What I like the most about my room is my bedroom and there are several reasons for my preference. why I think so.

to start with, my bedroom is just perfect for me and it's the best place where I can spend time all by myself without any distractions. 

it's my safe heaven. It feels like I'm in safe heaven. 

what's more, my room has a fantastic view of the forest. so whenever I need time to collect my thought, I look out the window and enjoy the fabulous view.

I love my room so much  -> 여러 강조하는 형용사, 부사를 추가하면 더 좋을 듯 합니다. 

I know that my house is not that luxurious or fancy but it's a perfect fit for me.