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평가 및 첨삭 부탁드려요.

김윤태 | 조회 524 | 추천 1
  • 2020.01.15
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자기소개

Hi~ AVA. Let me introduce myself.

I am YUNTAE KIM. Just call me KIM.

I am 26 years old.

And I am a senior at Hanbat University and I have a major of Mecanical Engineering. It is so interesting for me.

I live with familly in DAEJEON.

There are 5 people in my family : my parents, a elder brother INTAE, a younger brother SEUNGTAE and me.

As for my personality, I think I am an outgoing and generous person.

Because I like to express my ideas and feelings.

Also I always try to undertand other people.


사는 곳

집의 모습묘사

I live in a detached house located in eastern of city called DAEJEON.

It has white wallpapers and brown floor board.

There are 4 bedrooms, a livingroom, two restrooms, and a kitchen in my home.

2. 방의 가구와 가전제품묘사, 방 내부묘사, 제일 좋아하는 공간

I think my room is the number one of my house.

I have a small room has white walls and brown floors.

there are some funitures that is necessary of me : a bed, a hanger, table chair set, a mirror so on...

Ah! Funitures of my room have brown color, so make hormony with walls and floors.
Not beatiful, so natural.

And I have a labtobPC, a watch, a scientific calculator, and a sleeping light made by IKEA.

3. 집에서 언제 가족들과 시간을 보내며 주로 어떤 일을 하는가?

I study in cafe 8 hours a day because I am a jobseeker.

So I usually spend time with my familly on evenings.

I like to cook, that’s why I normally help my mother to prepare dinner.

Cooking is very interesting for me So actullay I often make my meal by myself.

4. 최근 집에 준 변화

I recently remodeled my room because it had old style.

I also purchased New funitures : a bed, a cloth hanger, a table set.

Then I considered how to arrange, and I finished it very well.

It made the room brighter and cozier so I am happy and satisfied.

So I love my room.


동네 및 이웃

동네묘사

I live in the eastern of Daejeon, one of the biggest cities in KOREA.

Among the part of eastern, my house is located in Yhongjeon district.

I love my neighborhood because There are many amenties such as general hospital, university, department store and so on...

these make me comfortable in life.

2. 이웃묘사 : 그들은 누구이며 무슨 일을 하고 얼마나 그들과 교류하나요?

I’ll tell you about my neighbors living in the next door.

There are a couple looks like mid 50s.

I think they are very kind because they help me sometimes.

For a example, when I cosidered to sperate my trash, they found and asked me “can I help you?” and actually they told me how to this.

Later, I said “thank you so much! my friends‘, and then they answered me ”it’s just a simple“

So that’s why I think they are very generous and I am lucky.

3. 동네에서 있었던 기억에 남는 경험

= 2를 바꿔서 쓰레기 분리수거를 도와주었던 이웃에 대해 설명

4. 당신의 동네가 어떻게 변했는지 과거는 어땠고, 지금은 어떤가요?

A long time ago, there are almost detached houses and high apartments.

And some stores are there, but really a few.

Back then, it was so uncomfortable...

But now, there are many amenities because a number of college students living alone is increased. And it is very comfortable to live in.

I think it is very good, probably I don’t leave from here

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