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요리하기 좋아하는 음식과 조리법
My favorite dish to make is seaweed soup.
I enjoy cooking it because it is easy to cook it, Also it is delicious and it is good the day after the drink.
before I cook, I usually prepare the ingredients. To cook it, you put seaweed in water and wait 30 minutes.
And, you need to boil water with seaweed. You should also add some shrimps and soy sauce.
요리하는 시간,빈도,음식
I usually cook on weekends. my mother cooks everyday. I try to cook on weekends so she can take a rest.
my favorite dish to make is seaweed soup. I enjoy cooking it because it is easy and delicious.
To cook it you need ingredients such as seaweed, shrimps, and galices. and you need to boil water with seaweed.
It's too easy, right?
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I started cooking when I was 13 years old.
I wanted to learn how to cook so I could cook for birthday of my mother.
She is the person who taught me to cook. The first dish was seaweed soup.
because koreans eats seaweed soup on their birthday.
she said that it tasted good, so I was happy.
After that, I cook seaweed soup on her birthday every years.
요리하던 중 뜻밖에 생긴일
one time, I was cooking kimchi stew with my mom. because I wanted to help mom.
but I accidentally added salt again. after my mom added salt to it.
the food came out too salty, so I had to put in water a lot.
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