쇼핑하다가 겪은 문제

Q. Unexpected difficulties can occur while we are shopping. What was a problem you recently experienced while shopping? How did you resolve this issue? Provide as many details in your response as possible.

A problem I had while shopping was I had a hard time choosing what to get..

In my case, I went shopping last week to get shoes.

There were so many beautiful shoes and I had a hard time choosing what to get. (one.)

Whenever I go shopping (Previously, every time I went shopping) , my sister helps(ed) me choose items.

However, (at that time) she was not with me.

So, I took pictures of pairs of shoes and sent them to my sister.

She responded right away and I could finally purchase my new shoes.

I was satisfied with my purchase.

자주 가는 상점과 이유

Q Is there a particular store that you visit regularly? Tell me what the store sells and why you like going there.

(clothing을 clothes로 바꿔주세요! clothing은 특정한 목적을 가진 옷들을 집합적으로 일컫는 명사입니당) 

I often go to a clothing store near my home.

It sells trendy clothing for women.

It also has matching shoes and accessories.

I like the store because of its stylish clothes and reasonable prices.

Also, the store is near my home, so I always go there when I need to buy something new.

I think it is a good place for shopping.

쇼핑하는 장소, 시간, 사람, 품목

Q Shopping is a popular activity. Tell me where you usually like to shop. When do you go there and who do you go with? What do you usually buy?

(이유를 덧붙여주면 더 풍부해질 것 같아요!)

The place I like to shop is an NC department store.

I like the store because of near my home.

I often go shopping at this store on the weekend. (왜냐하면 주말에는 사람이 적어서 쇼핑하기 편하기 때문이다)

I like going to there with my friends. (왜냐하면 친구들이 조언을 해준다)

I always go there to buy clothes. 

So I often browse through the items.

기억에 남는 쇼핑 경험

Q Describe a memorable or interesting experience you once had when shopping. What made this experience so unforgettable? Provide as many details as possible.

The most memorable shopping experience was when I got lost at store.

I was walking around looking for clothes I got lost because the store was wide.

To solve the problem, I asked the people the way. (to go out the store.)

Then, I found the right way. (to go~ 목적지를 써주는게 좋아요!)

This experience made me feel embarrassed.

부족한 부분 첨삭 부탁드려요ㅜㅜㅜ