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The place where I live is an old apartment in the Seoul city. The location is very convenient because the subway and bus station is very close near my house. It is in very crowed place, so sometimes it’s too noisy. When I enter the house, I can see 3 bedrooms, 1 bathroom, a kitchen and a living room. One of the bedroom is mine, another is for my younger sister and the other is for my parents. Of those, what sets my apartment apart from the others is my lovely bedroom. It’s not that big but it is quite cozy and safe. There are a bed, a dressing table and a desk for studying. The wall of my bedroom is full of sky and clouds. I chose this sky wall because it makes me feel fresh and I can remind of my childhood. Also, there are a lots of dolls that I have had since childhood. I always hug those during sleeping. The only thing that need to be improved is my closet. It is too old so I may buy another one. Anyway I love my house than any other houses in the world.

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The place where I live is an old apartment in the Seoul city. It is in very crowed place, so sometimes it’s too noisy. However, inside of my apartment is quite cozy and I like living in it very much. When I enter the house, I can see 3 bedrooms, 1 bathroom, a kitchen and a living room. Of those, the room I like the most is my bedroom, which is located across from the main entrance. It’s not that big but it is comfortable and safe. There are a bed, a dressing table and a desk for studying. What sets this room apart from the others is that the wall is full of the blue sky and clouds. I chose this sky wall because it makes me feel fresh and I can remind of my childhood. Also, there are a lots of dolls that I have had since childhood. I always hug those during sleeping. Of all the rooms in my house, my bedroom is definitely my favorite place to enjoy my free time. The only thing that need to be improved is my closet. It is too old so I may buy another one.

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